Solo founder rewrites cold email, swapping video link for one-word question

A solo AI founder says his cold email was ignored despite a clear pitch, so he rewrote it.

He replaced the video link with a one-word question and opened with the prospect's problem. The revised version also states pricing up front, uses first-person framing and short paragraphs, adds spintax variations, and gives each follow-up its own purpose. The founder's account is posted on X. He reports the change but does not report reply rates or other results.